The Tranquil Veil (finished?)

17.5 x 21.5 pastel on marble dust board, contact me about price
This painting has been obsessing me. What was wrong? I had posted it unfinished on November 12th and then left it to sit. The right bottom corner had been bugging me and the color harmony was wrong. So here are the changes. Change the shape and lighten of the bottom piece of land. Create more harmony by toning down the discord color of gold, heighten the dominant color. Done? We'll see.
On another note, last autumn the Turner exhibit was here in Washington. It was a mind blowing experience that I couldn't stay away from. I still keep thinking about his work. More later.